Furcadia Name: Syethia
IC Age: 1

How long have you been RPing on Furcadia?: No clue

Why do you want to join Zaphari?: I used to be in the pack but got removed

Desired Rank: Guardian

Describe your character: Shy but rather kind. She is very sweet to everyone and VERY loyal to her pack. She enjoys to relax most of the time but isn't what you would call lazy. She doesn't fight a lot and steers clear of danger. She avoids fights if she can but will fight if most nessary.

RP Post: As noon fell upon the woods, Syethia's bright yellow eyes flicked open. She walked out of the cave and stretched after her nap. The dim, midday-sun shined on her eyes, giving them an intelligent spark. She smelled rabbit meat nearby and wanted some. She followed the scent to a rabbit burrow, her steps gentle and soundless. As she looked in, the scent became more clear. It was an old scent and rabbits must have moved from the burrow. She sighed and shook her head, then went back to the den.

I like the appy, but be careful not to over-use pronouns. Also, I suggest adding an adequate ending to your post; it's kinda flat.